Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is often said that physical strength is a key element to get successful in sports, while others believe that mental strength is more significant. Personally speaking, both of them has their own role and be an important element to get a win in sports.
First of all, it is worth considering physical strength is one of the biggest advantages in sport, especially with sports that need much power such as football or basketball. It will possibly be a good support in the match by getting more opportunities, combine with supervisor personal skills, it would make any components be careful. Secondly, in some sports need to have good physically such as lift the weight or swimming, the player who doesn’t have enough physical strength would be not able to play. Thirdly, getting an extraordinary physical means that the rating of accidents in practice or in competition may decrease or at least, it would be less than normal. Injuries are always a problem which influent a lot in career's player. Therefore, this will not affect their conditions and performance in the match.
Nonetheless, physical strength is not enough to get success in sports, it will need to have mental strength. The players who just only depend on their strength would have no place in their subject. Having a good mind will promote skills and spirit. Take Cristiano Ronaldo's example, by training hard and make a breakthrough in his career, he is one of the examples who because of mental strength to be better. Another point worth noting is, in the match, mental strength such as the medician to cure player’s mood, too. If the team is losing, the spirit will promote effectively by diminishing their stresses and think of a suitable tactic. Afterward, they can have opportunities to change the battle position and be winning. On the whole, for people who don’t have good physical, with mental strength, it would help them to try better in physical strength.
To sum up, sports players have to face both physical and mental difficulties on the field. Consequently, the players need to develop both their physical and their mentality
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 550, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'mean'?
Suggestion: mean
...rdly, getting an extraordinary physical means that the rating of accidents in practic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, may, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, while, at least, such as, first of all, on the whole, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9661971831 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75214294965 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535211267606 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8396552068 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9444444444 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7222222222 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61111111111 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272238801407 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849756613863 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782912216323 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174479314504 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589130122301 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.