Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
From my point of view, both physical strength and mental strength are important factors in sport success for some following reasons. Initially, having physical strength is essential. Before taking part in any sports, people need to prepare good physical health because playing sports can consume a large amount of energy. For example, football players always have special diet with numerous nutrious food and regularly practising schedule to ensure that they are in the best condition. Moreover, when playing sports, people may cope with unexpected injuries and having good health can help them recover faster. Besides, mental strength is also important. Being in a good mood before participating in any matches may help people have better results. When players have to suffer from pressure and stress in a competition, they can make wrong decisions . For instant, if you take part in a competition with anxiety and fear, you may lose the chances to win. Therefore, being as cold as a cucumber in every situation is necessary. In conclusion, because of all above benefits, everyone should promote physical strength as well as mental strength to achieve success in sport.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 850, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 187.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25668449198 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60029140513 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631016042781 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2738359037 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3636363636 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263666961753 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10183025614 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115152241222 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263666961753 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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