It is undeniable that physical force plays a significant role on victory in sport activities, nevertheless, mental strength is also a factor which should be taken into consideration.
On the one hand, it is obviously that physical power is a basic foundation in sport, as in simply term, it measures an individual's capacity to overcome the external force and make impact on other objects or individuals. The majority of sport games requires physical strength and flexibility from the players, for instance, foot ball, swimming, skiing, etc. Additionally, to grasp the opportunity of victory or success in sport, the sportsman normally put a wide range of time and enormous effort to train, practice and familiarize themselves with the degree of physical power the competition demanded. Therefore, physical ability should be taken into account as the tools to achieve success in sport.
On the other hand, while there is usually ignorance of mental strength, it is worth mentioning the influences of mental ability in the victory in sport. Mental toughness is the ability to consistently perform training and grittily exercising towards an upper range of skills level. It could be referred to as an important methods for sportsman to keep track with their achievement, prevent them from giving up and motivate them to reach towards a specific goals, hence, achieve success. Hardly had any athletes accomplished any achievements without developing mental strength. Taken Tiger Woods as an example, he is an America professional golfer, who is tied for first in his field, is well-known for his mental toughness.
In conclusion, in my viewpoint, mental and physical strength plays an equally important role in success in sport, particularly, physical power seems like a tools, and mental toughness could be viewed as motivation to achieve success.
- Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport while other people think that mental strength is more important Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'method'?
Suggestion: method
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'goal'?
Suggestion: goal
...tivate them to reach towards a specific goals, hence, achieve success. Hardly had any...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a tool' or simply 'tools'?
Suggestion: a tool; tools
...particularly, physical power seems like a tools, and mental toughness could be viewed a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34931506849 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97147412449 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547945205479 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.9658774197 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.0 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5454545455 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2727272727 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260165250169 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102206510999 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608482076046 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169526220219 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469294552517 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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