The joint venture of politician and scientist make world better. Hence , individual have different views on influence by politician and scientist. Some believed that politician have utmost impact on the world while others believed that scientist are more influencer on people.
To begin with , politician are policy maker and rule the nation of the world. Politician can even decide whether need war and peace. War were fought only by the decision of the politician. As a policy maker, can make rules , break and amend the laws which impact nationally or sometimes internationally. For instance , the removal of the article 370 . Now any people of india can able to purchase land and property in Jammu & Kashmir. Apart from this politician represent our country globally . They are the face of the country. They work as a safeguard for nation's people. Their work decide reputation of the nation in global market. For example abhinandan, one of the soldier of Indian army felt down out of the border in Pakistan side , due to crash of the aircraft. Pakistan chase him and manipulate. But due to political pressure created on Pakistan by internationally, Pakistan had to sent back that warrior with respect. It create global impact for favour of india due to politician create fame internationally.
On the other side , scientist contribute a lot for the nation. scientist drive the world to progress and provide technical support. High technology developed by scientist have been applied in millitary . For instance , invention of GAROOD which is flying camera to detect terrorist place across the border used in URI attack. Further more , scientist helps to exploring outer space conduct by ISRO. They invent technology to prove nation's strength in international research. For example one of the best action conduct by ISRO to prove strength that is nuclear attack in pokhran. Successful research conducted by the hiding vision of satellite of America. It created greater impact on the world.
Further more i believed that by the seeing current situation politician play vital role. Politician directly and indirectly make contact with people. in vivid situation , politician helps to provide basic necessities to people , which impact nationally and apart from this on india is first country to airlift Indians who situated in abroad as they were unable to survive due to covid. For example China is origin of the covid-19. Indian government take strict action against china by ban their products and side by china as strength with other country.
In conclusion , growth of the world depends on politician as well as scientist. Scientist are backbone of country while politician are warrior. As i believed bothe play vital role and owr future depends on scientist as well on politician.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 41.998997996 176% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2337.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 448.0 315.596192385 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21651785714 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78064983246 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 732.6 506.74238477 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 16.0721442886 212% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3669340226 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.7352941176 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1764705882 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 3.4128256513 440% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210305751378 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054793728704 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779523697438 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152155136836 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126308930209 0.056905535591 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.