Some people think that radio has become out-of-date, and there is no need to listen to the radio for entertainment and news. Do you agree or disagree?
Ever since the appearance of modern technology, there has been a controversy over the radio has come to the verge of extinction or continued its adventure to be a means of entertaining and updating information. In my point of view, such pessimism is ungrounded and this device has a great deal of benefits that can not be replaced in the future.
In today's society, it’s undeniable that modern technologies such as smartphones, tablets, computers have been used widely by young adults and people with high interest in technology. Given the fact that these up-to-date gadgets are very addictive to not only the mature but also children from a very young age. With just one portable device, they can have access to various forms of entertainment like watching movies, listening to music, reading news. However, these devices require internet connection to approach and the price to purchase a single modern device is very high in comparison with a radio. As a result, many people with low income or in poor rural areas where electricity is costly and precious can not afford to purchase a modern one and are still loyal to the radio.
Apparently, radio doesn’t have all the functions that a luxury device has; however, it still remains its vitality as an accompaniment of many people. According to research, 71% of car drivers listen to the radio while driving on the way. This device may be small but it can bring forth drivers with an ocean of knowledge. By listening to the radio, drivers have a variety of choices to channels such as VOV traffic, VOV5 which teaches every language, VOV music, VOV news. For taxi drivers who spent almost their day in the car to make a living, radio has always been a valuable source of absorbing knowledge through educational channels, entertaining through Zone FM, or updating news instantly to avoid traffic jams during rush hour, finding the best way to get to the destination as soon as possible. So it’s obvious that everything a driver needs is nothing more but a portable radio to go along with.
Besides accompanying car drivers, radio has also been a friend of many families for years. The development of technology does not mean that everyone has a chance to approach it as in some poor rural areas, they don’t even have enough electricity to use, not to mention having internet to access to these modern devices. Meanwhile, radio can catch signals from a very far distance to operate channels and it’s a useful way for people from remote areas to highlands to attain daily news and intellectuality.
In summary, there is no doubt that advanced technology will take part in many aspects of our lives; however, I believe that there is no such thing that can take over the crown of radio as long as it can still create benefits to a group of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, however, may, so, still, while, as to, in summary, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 41.998997996 179% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2336.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 483.0 315.596192385 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8364389234 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68443886826 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 176.041082164 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530020703934 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 739.8 506.74238477 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.3066117736 49.4020404114 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.411764706 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4117647059 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220578204689 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667847687989 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450033160536 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114145348667 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395702790232 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.