In this contemporary era the development of the automation industry human's life has been changing at an unprecedented rate. A considerable number of people argued that the invention of robots will be playing an indispensable role in mankind development in the upcoming decades, while others vocalize that it would bring perilous and unwanted results to society. This essay will examine both viewpoints and explain why I believe that robotic machines are going to be the greatest helping hand soon.
To commence with, in the coming few years there would be several benefits of robotic machines in the development of society, first and foremost, it would be crucial in sea exploration as it is said that the sea is one of the greatest mysterious places on the earth, therefore every year numerous divers go to explore it, but they can not remain under the water for a longer period on their backpacked oxygen cylinder, whereas a robot will not have such time limitations on its stay due to the fact it does not need oxygen and this could allow them to find hidden natural resources which could be pivotal to society. Secondly, robots can be crucial in astronomical achievements, for example, recently NASA had sent a rover on the marsh to assess the climatic condition and available components in soil that would provide details to scientists whether settling the human colonies on the marsh is possible or not in the future.
On the other hand, few inevitable drawbacks of robots should be taken into consideration, such as purchase and maintenance charges are too high. Moreover, it is extremely risky sometimes because it does not have any kind of emotion for people, it treats everything as an object, for instance, in the year 2016, a robot was performing some work at a store in the Georgia United States during that time period, a salesgirl came to pick something from the selves suddenly the working robot held her in its arms and did not leave her until she died, therefore, people are recommended to make a proper distance when a robot is doing something.
In conclusion, although robots are sometimes makes detrimental effects, they will certainly deliver numerously beneficial developments for the global society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01886792453 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78663184155 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606469002695 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 172.91250497 49.4020404114 350% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 232.75 106.682146367 218% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.375 20.7667163134 223% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.0 7.06120827912 269% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131065509399 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605893244149 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0161178602633 0.0667982634062 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837362962617 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169605237658 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.4 13.0946893788 194% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.79 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.47 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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