Families are the most important in people's life especially children because they need them to teach them and protect them from the problems of life. I always likened parents like a bird's wing, without which he cannot fly and protect himself in danger. There are many duties that parents perform. Now I will discuses it.
Firstly, they must teach the children about life such as how to respect for others like people who are older. Teaching them what they should do and what they should not do and to punish them if they do something wrong. For example, when I was child my parents was say to me the things that to do it to be my life good, like they said to me to "deference those who are older than me because this will make me beloved, and I will not lie no matter what happened because our religion does not allow us to do that and I must complete my education because this is something that bring me to anything I want ", and when I was did some thing wrong they were punished me by not talking to me and entering me into my room and not leaving it.
We can forget that, the family must Parents should be able to live their children in a safe house and give them a safe life. For example, I remembered once day, I was walking at the way to returned to the home. I saw young girl her name her name is Sara she was 10 years old she was sad and cried. I asked her" why you are crying" she said that, " She said that her family asked her to go and bring them money to live with them, and that they do not have to spend their money for her".
Finally, In my opinion, the family must teach their children and nurture their children Because these actions complement one another, because children cannot learn without a decent and calm life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 630, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
... anything I want ', and when I was did some thing wrong they were punished me ...
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Line 2, column 634, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
...thing I want ', and when I was did some thing wrong they were punished me by not talk...
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Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'her name'.
Suggestion: her name
... returned to the home. I saw young girl her name her name is Sara she was 10 years old she was sa...
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Line 4, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t learn without a decent and calm life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, so, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 75.0 24.0651302605 312% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30239520958 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19142247429 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505988023952 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.681900807 49.4020404114 252% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 119.75 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8333333333 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228025081126 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941650935676 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824475601821 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157056282053 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465064986389 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.96 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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