Some people think that school should reward students who show the best academic result while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In academics, the most significant point is grade from everyone's perspective. Although the students who are good in their overall academics always score adequate. However, the students who are less interested in studies score below average. In the context of this some people think school should reward students who show best academic while some believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvement. In this essay, I will try to illustrate both views.
Students with good academics have already motivation from their parents and teachers as they imply their selfs performing well. Somewhere they are already self-motivated about theirs future aim hence their performance is up to the mark. For example- A person wants to become a scientist, doctor, or anything good in his or her life. They already have that vision in his or mind, therefore giving reward or nothing, do not make a large difference.
Whereas students with fewer grades, somewhere do not have that assessment on his or her performance. Need of a little push is profused, furthermore in rewarding them adds a primary point in their grades. They would give their best for a reward. For example- A survey shows rewarding students who are weak in academics has accelerate their grades.
In my opinion rewarding students would increase the competitive attitude in students.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'show the best'.
Suggestion: show the best
...think school should reward students who show best academic while some believe that it is ...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'accelerated'.
Suggestion: accelerated
... students who are weak in academics has accelerate their grades. In my opinion rewarding...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17727272727 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75190016997 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595454545455 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1905202169 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3571428571 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7142857143 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380980340441 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129382500894 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171159832756 0.0667982634062 256% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233682333669 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163405817579 0.056905535591 287% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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