Some people think that social networking sites have a huge impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree and disagree?
These days, our world experiences the proliferation of social media. Consequently, it is universally claimed that these flatforms attribute to changes on each person in particular and community in general. From my viewpoint, I totally support this belief.
In relation to the effect of social networking sites on each people regardless of gender or age, there are two main points I shed light on. There is no doubt that the revolution of the Internet and social applications gives rise to the ease of communication. With the assistance of a wireless connection, people are likely to convey their information to their beloved just within one minute. Back in the day, the previous generations, when social platforms did not dominate over other means of interaction, took longer time to wait for responses from their recipients as a result of geographical differences. On top of that, social networking sites are wonderful resources to broaden people's horizons because apart from social communication and recreational activities, they are able to serve those who employ them for learning purposes. Facebook, is a case in point, where various IELTS studying groups are established to facilitate lexical resources learning.
Regarding the whole society's impact, this essay focuses on two main merits. As far as ease of daily communication is concerned, our community tends to become closer and people can keep in touch with each other despite the transformation of location. In addition, the growth of society has become substantial and unprecedented because social platforms contribute to raise users' awareness via social and up-to-date news.
In conclusion, I'm in favor of the positive aspects of using social media on facilitating people's communication and leading to the flourishment of society.
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- The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, regarding, so, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, in general, in particular, no doubt, as a result, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42142857143 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12089730687 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2632144892 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.769230769 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160368762337 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509972304671 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437328382204 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831289251154 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419927217719 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.