Some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources while others think that it is essential for mankind to continue to explore the universe in which we live.
It is thought that space exploration is a waste of resources while other people believe it is important for individuals to continue to explore the galaxy in which we live. From my point of view, both notions have its own benefits and drawbacks appropriate with each person and each situation. The following essay will analyse these statement in detail.
First of all, in the industrialized world and with appearence of modern technology that the requirement of people have increased gradually, so space exploration is greatly significant for the society. Not only will this trend provide numerous interesting experient, valuable information and universe knowledge for the individual which improve their mentality life, but also the creative and imagination abilities of adolesence can be advanced by this phenomenon. Furthermore, the propotion of scientist and professor could be rose dramatically with the affection of scientific and space exploration which have strength impact for the economic background of their country. To illustrate, there was a vurvey by Climer Birdy, the famous interviewer, who is expert about the success of postgraduates who enjoy with galaxy research. The statistic demonstrated that nearly everyone has got plent of achievement in their career.
However, we can not negate the weakness of this problem for the people life. If the government pay atention too much on the space exploration, they will forget other fields such as education, entertainment and medical, and also socioeconomic problem can be widened where just wealthy and talent people have the opportunity to follow this kind hobby. Moreover, many government take advantage of space exploration's investment for their own revenue, various harmful influence will be led by this action to the young generation.
To conclude, though my agrument from the essay, space exploration is really improtance for our life, but it still have some negative aspect. The state need to have clear plans to improve their citizens for the nation's development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, still, while, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.3376753507 312% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44620253165 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98907607617 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610759493671 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3289355683 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.384615385 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281035066842 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100865868711 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137856854474 0.0667982634062 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177133247795 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766204452944 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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