In the current world people like to spend large amount of money on parties in special occasions.the topic is highly debatable among people whether it is necessary for individual and society or it is just waste of money. I believe both side so good reasons and will reflect my opinion in for their paragraphs.
Firstly, many people think that special event should be celebrated grandly as some events occur once in a lifetime. For example, marriage or becoming a parent first time, events like this occurs once in a lifetime and to make it more memorable people like to throw lavish parties which costs lots of money. Moreover corporate companies also throw parties which helps their staff members socialize and improve their productivity.
On the contrary, some people argue that spending lot of money on parties is money wasted as lots of food that are served at special occasions and parties gets wasted. Instead of organising parties, the money should be given to the one in need, for instance, many children in Africa do not get a single meal during day. Additionally, the parties also causes damage to environment as people do not dispose waste properly and the loud music at parties also causes noise pollution.
To summarise, even though memories of people are important, saving the environment and human lives are more important and people should spend less in parties and invest more in helping the one in need.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Moreover,
...vish parties which costs lots of money. Moreover corporate companies also throw parties ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95833333333 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5016522318 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579166666667 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.6530031691 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.222222222 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284982045436 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112537903023 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691122671515 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161571471217 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619496362 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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