Some people think that sports are important to society, while others think they are just leisure activities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, some people believe that sports attach great importance to the public. On the other hand, however, many argue that it is just a way for entertainment. In this essay I will review both sides of the debate to seek a conclusion.
To begin with, it is true that sports are beneficial to individuals no matter physically or mentally. it is doing exercises that can help people build their muscles because only having a strong body will people at all ages handle some heavy work such as moving big objects more easily. Besides, doing sports is a rewarding process, by which the public is able to improve their immune system so that they can stay away from cardiovascular disease, fluid.
On the other hand, some people hold that sports belong to the professionals. there is doubt that the public regard sports as leisure activities because there is limited number of people who have the potentials to become professional players and achieve some great prizes and honors in international occasions like Olympic Games. Moreover, not everyone will view sports as a career to which they will devote their whole life, so most people generally consider it as an after-dinner activities for relaxing or an effective way to strengthen family relationship as many parents are too occupied to keep an eye on their children.
All things considered, although some people believe that sports are merely some leisure activities, I still think that sport plays an important role in the society because it has brought advantages to people in terms of health and social areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, such as, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02671755725 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6734046166 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606870229008 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.6628167125 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.7 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266832924707 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104066362579 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724696196217 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167566698988 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639794836224 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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