People have different views with regard to the question of how to make our roads safer. In my opinion, both punishment and a range of other ways can be used together to improve road safety.
On the one hand, aggressive driving is a serious problem on our roads, so strict punishment such as heavy fine, suspension driving license, serve a prison for serious offenders, and even confiscate their cars can help to reduce the accidents. The aim of these punishments is that reckless drivers understand that their behaviors have negative consequences. I think road users tend to drive more safety after receiving penalty. AS a result, this way contributes to deter and force road-users to obey to traffic laws more strictly.
On the other hand, most people believe that strict punishment can be effective but only solves part of problems. Different approaches should be taken into account in various situations. In comparison to the past, more and more people have individual cars and use personal cars to commute. So, local authorities should promot public transport systems in order to decline using personal vehicles. Secondly, governments can offer better education in schools and special classes for volunteer in order to obtain driving license. Next is install warning sign in road’s neighborhood can say them the speed limitation and other important thing. Finally, vehicle quality should be checked every year, which one doesn’t have minimum standard quality will be banded from coming to streets and roads.
In conclusion, while harsher punishment can help to keep the safe on the roads, I believe that there are alternative ways that minimize traffic jam and accidents.
- incidence of X disease in Someland 78
- The graph below gives information from Annual Energy Outlook 2008 about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projection until 2030. 78
- The graph shows consumption of energy in the U S since 1980 with projections through 2030 78
- Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries? 61
- The graph compares employment rates in three sectors of the economy, in the UK, 2000 - 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 534, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'installed'.
Suggestion: installed
...rder to obtain driving license. Next is install warning sign in road’s neighborhood can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, second, secondly, so, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23985239852 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66963395229 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634686346863 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4048153792 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.428571429 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284840537653 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908151319263 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678078131211 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160818814305 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05648935225 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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