Some people think subjects taught in school are a waste of time, while other's disagree and believe that this type of education is useful for students. Give both views and your own opinion.
Some persons believe that the various subjects taught in educational centres are just a wastage of time. Nevertheless, others argue that education is the key for the all round development of children.
To begin with, mortals think that teaching all subjects in school is the waste of time because it put a lot of pressure on students by which they can not grow and develop themselves. Furthermore, they stick with books throughout the day to complete assignments and other homework activities and not able to participate in other sports like activities. Last but not least, all the students are unique and having different interests in subjects but due to compulsion, they have to study all subjects.
On the contrary, other mortals argue that education is the most powerful weapon to change the world. every subject has its own importance and help pupils to escalate their knowledge in each field. Also, if the scholars learn multiple subjects they will get many opportunities to choose their career in future. To illustrate, In my home country India, the school curriculum is vast and the students become doctor, engineer and teachers by taking education about all streams.
In conclusion, my personal perspective is that the all round development of scholars possible only when the institutions provide them huge knowledge regarding every subject.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, in conclusion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24770642202 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80780412296 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633027522936 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8952799074 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.4 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186270621966 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763510347426 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599755837572 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116022509232 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767110275828 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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