Some people think that to succeed, the only thing one needs is talent. Others disagree, saying that hard work is more important than talent.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowdays, it is a common argument that whether talent or hard work is crucial for success in life. But what is the most effective method for dealing with this burning topic. Some people believe that talent is more important than conventional hard work. In this essay I will discuss both of the arguments and draw a conclusion.
Firstly, with the help of talent or potential ability a man can uphold to the pick point of success. People often have this opinion because each of the person born with particular talent naturally. For example, A famous Indian cricketer called MS Dhoni had an essetoric skill for playing cricket from his early childhood. Aftermath later he emerged as a successful cricketer in Indian cricket history and all across the world. If talent can not help, it is a persevering way to achieve desirable success.
One the other hand there Is a common think that there is not any altercation instead of hard work in order to achieve success in real life. The main reason for believing this is that talent only work when someone stickler in hard work in proper way to gain something. For instance, Joynul Abedin hade a precise talent of drawing. Although, he reached to the apex point of his success with the help of consistent hard work. If he only depend on his talent rather than his hard work for hang in balance than it was to impossible for him to establish as a national painter and artist in Bangladesh.
In conclusion, allthough it is a common believe that talent is an important thing for success. I believe, hard work is an inevitable part in life for acquiring the success in real life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ket history and all across the world. If talent can not help, it is a persevering...
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...bedin hade a precise talent of drawing. Although, he reached to the apex point of his su...
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...for acquiring the success in real life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68771929825 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5200849087 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529824561404 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4974430629 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.5 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261541022065 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100628130626 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906285904113 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170055171235 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707377977889 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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