Although it is sometimes thought that teachers ought to teach the code of ethics to students so that they can behave well in the community,other people believe that teaching academic is the only responsibility of the teachers.In my opinion I consider that teachers should teach students the etiquettes from the school itself , which help them to become a better citizen in future life.
On the one hand, some people think that teachers ought to be responsible to teach code of ethics to students and I agree.Students spend most of their time along with teachers on the very moment they start schooling.This gives teachers an opportunity to correct mistakes made by their students on the spot itself.In other words , teachers can guide them by giving minor tasks like cleaning toilets and planting trees which help the student to learn the value of a better socio-economical life.
On the other hand,it is often considered by some other people that it is better if the emphasis at school is fully on teaching academics.In this competitive world ,every employers consider the academic performance of their candidates that finally becomes the major factor for a placement.Besides this without excellent performance students find its difficult to pass their entrance examinations for further studies and to get certified for professional qualifications.
In conclusion , while people may vary in their opinions ,I consider that learning moral values altogether helps children to become a civilized human being and teachers play a vital role in this.
- It is becoming increasingly popular to have year off between finishing school and going to university. What are advantages and disadvantages of this? 56
- Prevention is better than cure. Researching and treating diseases is too clostly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures.To what extent do you agree? 56
- Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students how to judge right or wrong and how to behave well Some say that teachers should only teach students about academic subjects Discuss both views and give your opinion 54
- It is becoming increasingly popular to have year off between finishing school and going to university. What are advantages and disadvantages of this? 87
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, if, may, so, well, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30894308943 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05725644767 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589430894309 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.2975951904 301% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.296632518 49.4020404114 237% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 326.5 106.682146367 306% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.5 20.7667163134 296% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.75 7.06120827912 379% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326663414644 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191204035696 0.084324248473 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949121847099 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191204035696 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0949121847099 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.3 13.0946893788 262% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.56 50.2224549098 19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 11.3001002004 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.41 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.1190380762 261% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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