Some people think technology makes life complex, so we should make life simpler without using technology. Agree or disagree ?
nowadays, it is believed that technological developments lead people to complexity life, so we should get rid of it. Personally, I disagree with this idea.
There are some reasons why people said that life with technology has been problematic and they would like to live without this innovation. first, technology has made people develop several diseases. For example, when you strain your eyes looking at computer and the device screens, it can cause people to need glasses much earlier in the life and using the headphones can cause people to lose their hearing over time. second, the technology causes a lack of privacy. Since, anyone can use virus and hacking to help them find the information they want to obtain. Therefore, people should simplify the influences of technology in our life.
however, it is undeniable that human gain benefit from technological advances. first information technology is assisting human being a lot in communication. for instance, unlike in the past, nowadays people use the internet not only to keep in touch with their friends and family but also to get valuable information around the world. second, technological developments also contributes to the development of healthcare system, which helps doctor detect and cure serious diseases.. As the result, patients' lives may be improved
In conclusion, on the whole, based on above discussion, I agree that the revolutionary of technology has both pros and cons. however, the demerits will be overshadowed by merits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32916666667 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92652797223 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658333333333 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.2236487304 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3571428571 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278214420818 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903449083845 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859190189521 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162362165261 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102666736265 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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