Some people think that technology makes life overly complex, so we should make life simpler without using the technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that technological development makes our life more complex and some people suggest that we should reject to use advanced technology in order to make our life simpler. I disagree with the claim that we should refuse technology.
It is reasonable that our life turns complicated due to the development of technology. Firstly, it is difficult to master high-tech. Especially for children and the old, learning technological tools such as computers may spend their plenty of time. Secondly, advanced technology can complicate our relationship with others. Modern people often devote themselves in surfing online, which may take up their spare time which they spent getting along with their family and friends in their real life. As a result, their relationship can be affected.
One of the main reasons why I do not agree to keep a simpler life without using the technology is that technology provides more convenience in our daily life. We cannot deny that with the help eletronic communication tools such as emails and social networks, people can connect with each other much more easily. For example, during the final, students can keep in touch with their professors via emails, which can allow their tutors to keep pace with their process of papers, even if they have no free time to discuss together in person.
Another is that, technology increases the efficiency of solving problems. With the help of advanced technology such as artificial intelligience and virtual reality, many problems in the aspects of medical treatment, industrial development and agriculture have been solved more effectively and efficiently. For example, nanorobots can help doctors remove tumors easily which are difficult to find and clean by manual.
To summarize, there is no doubt that technology may bring troubles to our life. However, I cannot accept the future without it since our life can be more convenient and efficient by utilising advanced technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28025477707 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81510648759 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557324840764 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0623318082 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.625 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256811156683 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908341905709 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116923093334 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174444489629 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156234597823 0.056905535591 275% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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