Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have differing views whether the adolescent period or adulthood is considered to be the happiest stage of life. While being a teenager allows someone to enjoy life without the need of worrying, I believe that it is happier to be an adult even if there are bigger responsibilities.
On the one hand, teenagers are not pre-occupied about their basic needs. This is because they have someone to provide these necessities in life, such as their parents or any adult member of the family. For example, parents are paying their tuitions and miscellaneous fees in school. They do not need to worry about money matters and the only thing that they do is go to school and study. However, I disagree with this school of thought because in some places especially in third world countries, teenagers are working hard to help their families and sometimes they tend not to enjoy their teenage years.
On the other hand, adults seem to be enjoying life more because they are in control of their lives. When someone reach the legal age, they do not need to depend on other people to decide things for them. They can do whatever they want as long as they have the means. For instance, when planning to buy a new car, they can choose the model they want to buy and pay it through their own money. I argue with this opinion because the freedom in deciding what I want makes me happier compared when I was a teenager in which decisions were all made by my parents.
In conclusion, I can understand why people believe that the stage of adolescence is the most enjoyable part of life, but it seems to me that being an adult is the happiest despite responsibilities.
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- The table below shows the production of cacao beans in six regions between 1992 and 1998 73
- The table shows information and predictions regarding the change in the percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries. 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 114, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'reaches'.
Suggestion: reaches
...in control of their lives. When someone reach the legal age, they do not need to depe...
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Line 9, column 494, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at I want makes me happier compared when I was a teenager in which decisions were...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, third, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64745762712 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54954017969 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538983050847 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7986330899 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.461538462 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140382696024 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576402534361 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510730093187 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102310902918 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349585678073 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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