According to some folks, the adolescent age is considered the most fascinating stage of life for a lot of individuals whereas other people believe that adulthood attracts a more fulfilling life despite the challenges of accountability it poses. Although the care-free nature of childhood makes it interesting and less stressful, I believe that being an adult gives more meaning with a tremendous sense of purpose.
One good reason why adult life is more enjoyable than the teenage phase is that unlike a child, a grown-up is more matured minded, they tend to make less costly mistakes that teenagers would have readily made. Adults are generally known to make careful and well analysed decisions which yields productive results. A study has shown that teenagers commits crime more frequently than adults due to their immature sense of reasoning.
Another point to consider for preference of adult life over children's in terms of happiness is the aspect of purpose. Older persons usually have their spouse and children, this is always a source of joy to them and makes life more meaningful rather than miserable and lonely. Furthermore, adults are not known to indulge in risky behaviours because they are aware of the indirect harm it will cause their family for example, older individuals would not expose themselves to reckless sexual activities for the danger of being infected with sexually transmitted diseases which will consequently infect their partners and affect their children in turn.
Admittedly, living as a teenager tend to seem easier because they are not burdened with responsibilities, they rarely account to anyone hence, they can act anyway they please. However, the deadly consequences this poses makes their lives a regret. In addition, due to their untamed minds, they are not matured enough to take crucial decisions rightly which makes them an easy prey for life's uncertainties such as addictions, depression, and suicide.
In conclusion, teenage stage of life may look easy on the surface but its consequences gives adult living and edge such as peacefulness, purpose filled life and family as a source of joy and satisfaction.
- IELTS Task 1 - Tables give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries 78
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 73
- Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like Others believe that that should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and technology 80
- The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 10
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...ngful rather than miserable and lonely. Furthermore adults are not known to indulge in risk...
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Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...hence, they can act anyway they please. However the deadly consequences this poses make...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, may, so, well, whereas, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26589595376 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78881816654 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57225433526 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.1369380349 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.833333333 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8333333333 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14292150058 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563385091309 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435333477319 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887652134941 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469294494571 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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