In there advertising, business is nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way.
Why is this?
Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
It is now a common practice for advertisement companies to emphatically buttress that their goods and services are different in some aspects. In my opinion I vehemently agree that this awareness strategy is of utmost importance for any industry who wants to excel as this will maintain uniqueness, catch customers' attention and enable clients to have more faith in their product which will ultimately increase sales.
One good reason why business institutions need to emphasize on the newness of their product is because it gives a sense of uniqueness to the products. This enables the end users to understand that their services are different from others and in turn gives the impression that they are special thereby increasing sales for example the idea of producing Coke zero (no sugar) passes an information to Coca-Cola lovers who are worried about diabetes. This will encourage them to purchase more Coke zero as this product is sugar tolerant to the body.
Another points to consider in making a product anew is that it draws the attention of the customer. There is a popular saying that customers are attracted to what they see. Therefore, re-packaging of goods goes a long way to impress the users. For instance, a green colour wrapping of herbal toothpaste gives the consumer the impression that its constituents are natural thereby impacting positively on sales.
Finally, rebranding a product to have a newness outlook increases the faith of those consuming it. A good example is the alarming rate at which people are affected with chronic and acute kidney diseases, this has been linked to the use of toxic substances present in drinks. A good innovation to calm people's fear that one's product or consumer goods is safe is to manufacture nature-friendly drinks, this will obviously bring about consumer satisfaction and ultimately increase sales of goods.
In conclusion, while it is essential to continuously reform products, the enormous benefits of increasing sales and satisfying customers cannot be overemphasized.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25076452599 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9192385685 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571865443425 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.8878687545 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.076923077 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1538461538 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182095265322 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627420396339 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553841543158 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854440536541 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588708697794 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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