In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In this day and age, advertising that has flooded our lives has become a powerful tool. While I do not deny that the proliferation of advertising contributes to the increase in sales of commodities, I would also argue that advertising truly responds to consumers needs.
On the one hand, advertising has a considerable effect on customer purchase behavior in various ways. To begin with, businesses and brands tend to exaggerate and enhance the appearance of their products in their advertisements to attract more customers. For instance, most brands of instant noodles often show bowls of delicious noodles full of seafood or meat, making their goods more attractive. Additionally, advertising from brands of fashionable and luxurious items creates trends, especially on social media, prompting people to buy their products to prove that they keep up with with the newest trends . For example, every year people often choose to buy the latest smartphone model to replace their current ones which still function well.
On the other hand, I believe that the increase in product sales is primarily based on customers demands, not solely on advertising. Firstly, because there are useful and necessary goods for daily life, people are willing to pay for them without much advertising, such as basic hygiene products and food. These essential items are often purchased out of necessity, regardless of promotional efforts- repeat idea. Also, thanks to the development of the Internet, people can easily look for information and consider it before making a decision to buy any product. Online reviews, product comparisons, and detailed specifications allow consumers to make informed choices independently of advertisements.
In conclusion, although advertising has a profound impact on consumer decision-making, I believe that people are ultimately capable of buying suitable products due to the information provided by advertising. It is essential to recognize that while ads influence consumer behavior, the final purchasing decision is often guided by individual needs and thorough research.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55625 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08258560666 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61875 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4228826078 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174184364017 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587620848433 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545184066025 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094793700886 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529994570485 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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