Some people think teenagers should concentrate on all subjects at school. Others believe that teenagers should focus on the subjects they are best at or more interested in. To what extent do you agree?
It has been arguing that whether students devote all their effort to all subjects or just the subjects which they are good at of interested in. although just focusing on one particular subject is easier to gain success, I believe that every student should concentrate on all subjects.
On the one hand, interested and specialized things can be a powerful incentive which motivates them to work hard. Without unlike things distracting their energy and wasting their attention, students can maintain steady passion of studying. And it is easier for them to study deeply and achieve further than those uninterested. after graduation, the specialized skills are helpful to their vacation prospects. Vincent van Gogh, although living a life of poverty and bitterness, ultimately proved his passion and talents in painting after his death.
On the other hand, it is perhaps more helpful for students to study all subjects with all their hearts. Firstly, interests indeed play an important role in people`s study, but most people have no ideas about what they exactly interested in before school. Therefore, studying every subject is beneficial to trigger their interests. Secondly, different subjects are related and it is hard to achieve higher success if just specialized in one single area, especially in scientific field. Finally, even though students will not embark on some subjects they learn in the future, those subject can have a positive effect on their daily lives.
In conclusion, although I can understand the reason why people advice students just dig into their interested or best subjects, I still think studying all subjects have more positive effects on teenagers` development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...chieve further than those uninterested. after graduation, the specialized skills are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39552238806 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77366084361 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600746268657 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0233500356 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.230769231 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288693299552 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927358969001 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875562865669 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184189085474 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109842405969 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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