Some people think that television is becoming a reason less communication among family menbers.do you agree or disagree
In the present world,due to the technological advancement numerous gadgets are presented for the use of human being and make their life better.It is consider that family members have been not communicated with each other because of extra use of television.However,television is not a single reason by which masses are not able to vonnect with each other.
To begain with,television is a source of entainment so people canspend their most of leasure time to watch drama,catoons and news to invest their extra time in the productive way by getting the information.nawadays ,people domot have much time to conected with their family as well as friends due to the excessive use of television.moreover,after completed the work most of parents want to relax theirself by enjoying telicaste shows instead of talking with their juveniles.so,childrens can indulge in illicit activities because of the less guidance of guardian.beside it,behaviour of the masses can also be changed by watching crime as well as emotional showes which is also creat comunication barriour betten the people.
On the other hand,masses are workinh for twenty four hours to eke out money for the better future of their family due to that people are not able to connect with their family mambers.toexemplify,because of the over burden of work 70%employes are not properly connect with their near once and it also make their bond weak .
To be recapitulate ,excissive use of television is also effect the relations of family bt it also work as information provider .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: It
... human being and make their life better.It is consider that family members have be...
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Suggestion: considered
... being and make their life better.It is consider that family members have been not commu...
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Suggestion: However
...ther because of extra use of television.However,television is not a single reason by wh...
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Suggestion: , television
...cause of extra use of television.However,television is not a single reason by which masses ...
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Suggestion: , television
...vonnect with each other. To begain with,television is a source of entainment so people can...
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... way by getting the information.nawadays ,people domot have much time to conected ...
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...the excessive use of television.moreover,after completed the work most of parents want...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the parents') or simply say ''most parents''.
Suggestion: most of the parents; most parents
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... the less guidance of guardian.beside it,behaviour of the masses can also be changed by wa...
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...ur betten the people. On the other hand,masses are workinh for twenty four hours to ek...
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...ct with their family mambers.toexemplify,because of the over burden of work 70%employes ...
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...ke their bond weak . To be recapitulate ,excissive use of television is also effe...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'effected'.
Suggestion: effected
...te ,excissive use of television is also effect the relations of family bt it also work...
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Message: Did you mean 'works'?
Suggestion: works
...fect the relations of family bt it also work as information provider .
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... bt it also work as information provider .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23577235772 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.9323344749 2.80592935109 140% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552845528455 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.2975951904 301% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 214.766733923 49.4020404114 435% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 322.0 106.682146367 302% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.5 20.7667163134 296% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.0 7.06120827912 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100000658127 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664067857739 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0100255449148 0.0667982634062 15% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0664067857739 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0100255449148 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.0 13.0946893788 260% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.1 50.2224549098 2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 11.3001002004 250% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.0 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.77 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.1190380762 261% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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