Some people think that telling the trust is not always essential. It is necessary to tell lies sometime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Being honest has been encouraged at all the time; however, it is thought that telling lies are necessary in some special situations. I somehow disagree with this statement because it helps people overcoming the unfortunate situations; whereas, some people can be hurt after hearing the truth and i am going to outline my opinions below.
Practically, some people believe that all the truth should be told because secrets will be leaked gradually and they can not stand on knowing lastly. Moreover, some people become angry with their family because of feeling unreliable; while they might solve that problems effectively.
On the other hand, telling the truth is not always suitable for all aspect. Firstly, the most common reason is voiding grief from their relatives because there were many people become negative on the death of someone. Consequently, they ignore their recent life (such as work, family, health, etc...) or even choose the death to forget. For instance, during the period that I prepared for my highschool graduation exam which is very meaningful to my future; my uncle dramatically died and my family voided me for a long time because they did not want to distract me. As a result, I already passed the the exam to enroll into the university that I dreamed to study in. Secondly, some people have problem on nerve and when they receive a shock news, they probably become amnesic.
Inconclusion, all the truth are not really necessary to tell in some special situations. Therefore, each individual must learn how to accept and overcome the unfortunate the truth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 297, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...can be hurt after hearing the truth and i am going to outline my opinions below. ...
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Line 5, column 596, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...tract me. As a result, I already passed the the exam to enroll into the university that...
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Line 5, column 596, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...tract me. As a result, I already passed the the exam to enroll into the university that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, while, for instance, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06870229008 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5887768601 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625954198473 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8384143999 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.153846154 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1538461538 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157722549806 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608611922526 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649959231682 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1081925948 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466992444779 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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