People are divided on the importance of private secondary schools. There are some,who claim that studying in non-government secondary schools is better for academic students.However,there are few others,who argue that these schools are detrimental for the society. This essay will not only discuss both views,but also my opinion will be highlighted while concluding this.
There are some reasons,why people believe that studying in private schools is beneficial for students.The first and foremost strong reason,which cannot be avoided is that nowadays most private schools offer small classrooms size. So, children can receive more individual attention from teacher.secondly, private schools not only offer better education,but also provide all facilities,which are needed by children. If children can loss their students confidence,then private school teacher inspire their students to do something new in their life. To cite an example,a report study by Delhi university in March 2018 found that there are some parents,who put their children in private school despite of government school. This is because of better education.
On the other hand,there are some others,why human race argue that private school do more harm than good. To begin with, private schools do not have strongly rules and regulations. In addition, parents have to do a lot of effort to select right private schools for their children because in today's time private schools have a lot of education fees. If parents of poor background put their children in P
private schools,then children of poor background find it very difficult to study in these schools.Hence, studying in private schools has a lot of advantages.
In conclusion,i firmly believe that private secondary schools create a lot issues in our society. However,private secondary schools provide qulity education and have some advantages. Although, private schools offer all facilities,it's disadvantages to the society cannot be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6835016835 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22068612257 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52861952862 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.865767871 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.533333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372613282417 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145844371795 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574034450078 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226109309258 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524434833696 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.