Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion
People have differing views in terms of making noise. While some people agree that the authorities should put noise under control, I believe that it should be free to creating noise.
On the one hand, there are those who believe that the state should give some strict measures in order to control noise. Firstly, living under the noise pollution condition can cause many health problems such as insomnia, hearing loss or mental deterioration, and in the long term, this situation can even lead to deaf. Secondly, the working productivity can also be reduced as a consequence of noise. For example, many officers complain that they cannot focus on their tasks as well as have difficulty in communicate with their colleagues due to the noise from vehicles circulating down on the streets or construction sites from vicinity.
On the other hand, I side with those who argue that people should have permission to make as much noise as they want. The main reason for this view is that many individuals find their happiness and fell relax as they turn the volume louder to enjoy favorite songs. For instance, some friends of mine agree that turning on music louder could help them feel more comfortable after a long day of working. Furthermore, with the development of new technology, scientists have found the methods to prevent noise from affecting others like walls and windows that can block noise.
In conclusion, while there are some reasons to believe that the government should control noise, my own view is that there should be freedom to make noise.
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- Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
- IELTS Writing task 1
- Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 134, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean ''?
...se, my own view is that there should be freedom to make noise.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95038167939 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50595991412 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580152671756 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7237108603 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.909090909 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331010733986 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131580556627 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885412440054 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224730475003 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535152439724 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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