A group of people suppose that the domestic authorities should implement stringent obligations about the amount of noise produced by a person due to the interference and distraction it causes to surrounding people. Personally, I believe that this kind of law could bring both benefits and drawbacks, but the benefits seem to eclipse the disadvantages.
On the positive side, imposing strict policy on making noise might rapidly decrease the noise pollution at schools and workplaces, which then leverages the working and studying outcomes. That said, the decrease of intrusive sound made by a person means that the increase of sound quality and the more concentration another person might get to complete their tasks precisely. As a result, this person not only boost their productivity but also their working or studying quality which benefits himself as well as his organisation.
On the other side, another group of people may find it is extremely unreasonable because this policy can deprive them of freedom of speech. They will claim that they are constituting to the whole society, so making some noise is nothing serious or harmful, therefore, a fining fee level is unreliable. In other circumstances, the authorities could exploit the laws to profiteer from the obligation. For instance, in Vietnam, there is a law that fine noisy people in public places and that money can be a lucrative income for some of the Vietnamese security forces.
In conclusion, a severe policy about annoying people with noise might upgrade the studying and working environment but possibly enrage a group of people if it is not implemented approximately.
- Some people think that school should reward students who show the best academic results while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements Discuss both views and give your own opinion 84
- Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view 78
- Many goverments think that economic progress is their most important goal Some people however think that other types of progress are equally important for a country Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 78
- In some countries more young adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 89
- Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their wast 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 526, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...hat money can be a lucrative income for some of the Vietnamese security forces. In concl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25378787879 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94105066947 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.3247583131 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.7 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222108884227 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793738182516 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486943805561 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123843339574 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387208148434 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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