Some people think that travelling in a group is the best way to travel. Others, however, prefer to travel alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about whether setting off on an accompanied tour or on a solo one gives more satisfying experiences. From my perspectives, each shows its own potential to benefit travellers. Depending on what should be compatible with our lifestyles, we are likely to make opposed decisions on the one that fits us the most.
On the side of travelling alone, it is undeniable that being on our own can provide us with more freedom during the trip. It is due to the fact that one is able to make a flexible schedule, including the time and the places chosen totally by that individual . This means travellers being alone are likely to head up to anywhere at any time they desire, as they do not have to consider others’ references. Besides scheduling, travelling solo also makes things simpler when it comes to deciding which accommodation and means of transport. Furthermore, being alone during a trip is an amazing opportunity for us to develop some particular soft skills such as organizing skill, communication skill,.., even survival skills. To be more specific, being independent might raise many issues that require those skills to be dealt with . As we lack others' support, we can find ourselves struggling over unexpected and unfortunate situations such as health problems, loss of direction, etc. Coping with those problems means that we have the chance to improve our soft skills.
Group trips are also worth considering, since they are an economical choice for travellers. It is an obvious fact that we are likely to save more money splitting the cost of the trip than bearing it ourselves, not mentioning that there are sometimes discounts on group purchasing for accomodations, entertainment services, etc. Moreover, travelling together means that we are safer and more secure during the journey as we have others' support in case of emergencies. For example, we are less likely to be robbed or be assaulted when having others accompany us. Support from friends and family is also important in the case that we come down with a flu during the trip. Besides, the more the merrier. Having friends around certainly gives us more fun and makes the travelling experience more enjoyable. When we have our close ones there sharing those experiences, it will definitely make all the moments more memorable.
On the whole, either travelling solo or in a group brings travellers unique benefits and experiences. Both ways are worth trying in terms of making a memorable and joyful trip. Depending on one’s mood and purpose, a suitable choice should be made.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...places chosen totally by that individual . This means travellers being alone are l...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...as organizing skill, communication skill,.., even survival skills. To be more spe...
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Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...s organizing skill, communication skill,.., even survival skills. To be more spec...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...at require those skills to be dealt with . As we lack others support, we can find ...
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Line 3, column 1000, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'problems'' or 'problem's'?
Suggestion: problems'; problem's
...ss of direction, etc. Coping with those problems means that we have the chance to improv...
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Line 7, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Both ways are worth trying in terms of making a memorable and joyful trip. Depe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, such as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2162.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 427.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06323185012 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83130916411 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538641686183 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5068449996 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2727272727 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4090909091 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160278467364 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509036231856 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615971264697 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114858332157 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512642978651 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...places chosen totally by that individual . This means travellers being alone are l...
^^
Line 3, column 694, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...as organizing skill, communication skill,.., even survival skills. To be more spe...
^^
Line 3, column 695, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...s organizing skill, communication skill,.., even survival skills. To be more spec...
^^
Line 3, column 827, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...at require those skills to be dealt with . As we lack others support, we can find ...
^^
Line 3, column 1000, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'problems'' or 'problem's'?
Suggestion: problems'; problem's
...ss of direction, etc. Coping with those problems means that we have the chance to improv...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Both ways are worth trying in terms of making a memorable and joyful trip. Depe...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, such as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2162.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 427.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06323185012 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83130916411 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538641686183 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5068449996 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2727272727 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4090909091 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160278467364 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509036231856 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615971264697 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114858332157 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512642978651 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.