Some people think watching movies is a waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people hold the opinion that watching films are time wasting activity. While I believe that watching movies at leisure time relentlessly will improve the knowledge as well as it can be the best learning for everyone.
Nowadays, it is commonly seen that tendency of watching movies has increased swiftly as compare to past, henceforth currently people prefer to spend their plenty of spare time by watching movies that already has become the habit of many youngsters. Furthermore, one of the obvious advantages of watching movies is to get the lesson within a short time instead of reading book which always consume ample amount of time. Many intellectual people are concerned that watching any visualization thing can be easy to memorize relatively others.
More to add it, large number of people is eager to watch movies at cinema hall to enjoy the environment and release the stress of work that eventually is far beneficial for their mental health. On the flip side, especially it has seen in youngish people that they have become more and more addicted of watching movies which has number of adverse consequences for instance, getting obesity, laziness, wastage of time, and many other diseases which ruins their lives.
To sum up, my inclination supports the statement that watching movies has both consequences which depends on people to utilize their time effectively whether it is movie or something else, along with benefits not to overlook its disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 245, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fits not to overlook its disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, look, so, well, while, for instance, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1875 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69335280005 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608333333333 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.2931518515 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.625 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287894615491 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145681313721 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677411037037 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188484474012 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513076578224 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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