It has been observed that from the very beginning of the time, most of the leaders have been male because of our male dominant society. So far we have seen two world wars which had resulted in unrepairable damage and loss of millions of lives. However, countries under female leadership were able to maintain peace and harmony efficiently. Hence, I strongly agree that women are better leaders and can spread peace in the world. This essay will elaborate on the facts about the supporting view.
To begin with, It is evident that women are more empathetic about families and children. Moreover, they promote welfare and humanity, for instance, during world war two, Queen Elizabeth remained neutral and decided not to participate in the war which could have caused huge damage to the country and its economy. Secondly, women are more managed and they like to plan ahead, to illustrate Indira Gandhi who was Primeminister of India, created several programs and policies to help the economy of the country because of this. numerous people were able to receive employment. In addition, female leadership encourages female empowerment, nowadays more women are at the top positions in various fields and progressing rapidly.
On the contrary, male dictators such as Adolf Hitler had spread hatred and violence among people. During the Holocaust, he captured people mainly Jews in camps where they were starved to death. There are countless emperors and leaders such as Saddam Hussain and Mohammed Gadafi, who demolished their own countries for power and money without thinking about the outcomes of conflict. As a result, many adults and children were displaced during the war, also they were separated from their families.
To conclude, women have always been maintaining peace, harmony, and accordance through their work and policies. Hence, it will not be biased to state that the world needs more female leaders to avoid wars and foster goodwill.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: It
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...economy of the country because of this. numerous people were able to receive employment....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19303797468 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50531201393 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610759493671 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9908438533 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5625 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169894594266 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537412572752 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541392758093 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102793496508 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374223017242 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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