Some people think that we should focus on processes to be successful in life. Others, however, believe that results are more important.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A successful life is believed to be the ultimate goal of human beings. To succeed in life, it is controversial that whether people should concentrate on the processes or the results. This essay aims to analyze the two polarised viewpoints and express my perspective that the success of life depends greatly on the process.
Firstly, it is reasonable that focusing on processes is a crucial element leading to fulfillment in life. For example, so many students decide to drop prestigious universities regardless of the promising career paths because of the learning environments. This reality illustrates that the university experience is more important than the promising outcomes after graduating from that tertiary education. Besides, life satisfaction depends on meaningful relationships, which can only be made from deep emotional connections in the process of getting over ups and downs for a common goal. Therefore, paying attention to moments during each process is believed to contribute to a successful life.
On the contrary, the outcomes are widely believed to be the decisive factors leading to an accomplished life. In other words, the significance of the process is based on the value of the outcomes. For instance, the journey of establishing a start-up is so challenging that more than 80 percent of the start-ups cannot last longer than the first year. Only those who can survive from that battle, then make a lot of profit are recognized and praised as a symbol of a successful life. Besides, materialism including financial and social status, which emphasizes rationality represented by tangible recognition, has gained a lot of attention in modern times.
To conclude, although the main motive in creating a successful life is either the experience or the outcomes, my perspective gravitates towards the former factor. In other words, I strongly believe that successful life is not defined by the results only but the emotional connections formed in the process of achieving them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34069400631 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0839604616 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561514195584 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.810270878 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.866666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261030104257 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923659203858 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616311020477 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166917507272 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435096003418 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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