Some people think young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others think that they should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
As a result of rapid social development, the role of traditions seems to have declined significantly and there is a debate as to whether young people should follow these traditions or not.
Some people, particularly some elderly citizens, preserve the old way of life and hold some conventional customs. The believe that young people ought to practice the time-honored traditions as these traditions can help to enhance the cohesion of families as well as solidarity of the country. For instance, on some festivals, young people are expected to return home to reunite with their family members, no matter how busy they are. By showing respect for family and for their parents, young people learn to be considerate, social and responsible. Also, there is a wide concern that some traditions may die out in several decades if young people show little interest in them. Therefore, some people consider it important for young people to inherit and preserve the traditional culture.
However, some other people argue that young people should be allowed to act in their own way as they live in a world different from that of their parents and grandparents. It is unrealistic to require young people to follow all traditions, some of which are outdated and of little value. Living in a fast changing society, young people, creative and innovative, tend to adapt to the new environment and embrace the new lifestyle. So we should let them make their own choice rather than force them to.
Personally, I do not agree that young people should follow traditions in every aspect of social life. The survival of a tradition depends on how it accommodates the need of people. However, for some endangered traditional culture, it is the duty of the government to take measures to protect it and raising the awareness among young people can be an effective way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99029126214 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7651368724 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543689320388 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5447028463 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.142857143 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37816765278 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142839520127 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737580768411 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243503126751 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333676148461 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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