It has always come to debate that whether the existence of zoos or not. While there might be some reasons to support the foundation of zoo, i am of the opinion that they should be completely abolished.
On the one hand the option to the demolish some viciuos zoos can be a good idea for some several reasons. The first and foremost reason can be seen as there are a number of organizations that capture wild animals to carry out illegal activites. For instance, the imagine of animals are kept in zoos and not provided with enough food lead to emaciation and malnutrion in illegal animal shelters. It cause a great damage to endangered animals. Such zoological garden should be eliminated.
On the other hand, i believe that zoos are helpful in saving natural animal from harm. Colossal numbers of species are becoming extinict across the word, for that reason, zoo aid conservations are essential to the long-term survival of numerous species. For example, natural animals are protected from a variety of threats such as illegal hunter, extreme weather condition and fatal diseases. Zoos will help keep endangered species in save and diversify the animal world.
In conclusion, the prons and cons are easily found in keeping those places opened. Howerver, the importance of zoos in protecting animals and breeding endangered ones is more significant than the drawbacks. I think that instead of closing animal sanctuaries, we should promulgate the animal rights and have heavier penalties for those who illegally traffic and keep animals.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...asons to support the foundation of zoo, i am of the opinion that they should be c...
^
Line 2, column 31, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...lished. On the one hand the option to the demolish some viciuos zoos can be a good idea fo...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ry out illegal activites. For instance, the imagine of animals are kept in zoos and not pro...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 399, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...lnutrion in illegal animal shelters. It cause a great damage to endangered animals. S...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 405, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'great damage'.
Suggestion: great damage
...on in illegal animal shelters. It cause a great damage to endangered animals. Such zoological ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ould be eliminated. On the other hand, i believe that zoos are helpful in saving...
^
Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...son, zoo aid conservations are essential to the long-term survival of numerous sp...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07874015748 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66165027169 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606299212598 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0699006584 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1428571429 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306580135248 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965603049494 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631066997219 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183444124638 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031992566997 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...asons to support the foundation of zoo, i am of the opinion that they should be c...
^
Line 2, column 31, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...lished. On the one hand the option to the demolish some viciuos zoos can be a good idea fo...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ry out illegal activites. For instance, the imagine of animals are kept in zoos and not pro...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 399, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...lnutrion in illegal animal shelters. It cause a great damage to endangered animals. S...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 405, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'great damage'.
Suggestion: great damage
...on in illegal animal shelters. It cause a great damage to endangered animals. Such zoological ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ould be eliminated. On the other hand, i believe that zoos are helpful in saving...
^
Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...son, zoo aid conservations are essential to the long-term survival of numerous sp...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07874015748 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66165027169 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606299212598 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0699006584 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1428571429 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306580135248 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965603049494 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631066997219 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183444124638 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031992566997 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.