Some people today prefer to get advice for medical problems and do not want to visit a doctor. Why is this? Is this a positive or a negative development
Nowadays, a few individuals are preferred to get online or others opinion for medical issues instead of going to the hospitals. The impending essay will discuss why this is happening and how this would be a negative development for society.
There are several reasons behind this situation. To begin with, one of the most prominent reason is higher consultation charges are taken by the hospitals and they charge for medical bills more compared to others. Secondly, a few people taking others advice for smaller causes such as fever, headache, and cough are the most common issues. For example, in the present generation young people opting for online medicine for the above issues because of the higher charges in the hospitals. Thus, the masses think that this type of medication is simple and affordable.
In my view, selecting medicines by some humans’ choice may have greater disadvantages. Firstly, doctors are specialized to treat the public based on their symptoms and they suggest medicines according to the same. If they take their own medicine it will impact on health system because people don’t know about the tablets, injections and ointments which are suitable for the disease. For instance, some of the injections and tablets contain high drug levels, if anyone takes without a doctor’s recommendation it would lead to infections or sometimes it may be caused to death. So, this practice is not a good idea to follow. Hence, it would be a negative impact on the community and the public.
In conclusion, the reasons for choosing their own medicine illustrated above. However, this is not a good practice because it may lead to physical and mental imbalance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...o others. Secondly, a few people taking others advice for smaller causes such as fever...
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Line 5, column 399, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...suitable for the disease. For instance, some of the injections and tablets contain high dru...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11956521739 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69688640515 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579710144928 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4989655049 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285190466105 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896159066563 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590352288001 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173603598999 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825913196868 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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