Nowadays, the Internet has a major impact on every aspect of human life. We can see, an increasing new trend where individuals search online information like symptoms, causes, cure, precautions and so on, with regards to their illnesses. That definitely doesn’t mean that every other individual relies on the medical data available online, nor many of them would like to consider it useful.
Well, in my opinion, as the internet reaches out to the masses instantly, a lot of awareness could be easily created online and data from reliable sources with respect to various medical disorders can be put up online, which would significantly help the society. While searching, for medical issues online, one has to ensure the data is from trustworthy sources, as there are a plethora of websites sharing such kind of information. The details if not written by medical professionals, the websites should be held accountable after screened by experts, as the reader could land in a medical issue, due to incorrect information. For example, if a person tries to fix a wound on his body, which he does by not understanding the severity of it, he might end elevating the wound or ending up with an infection or excessive bleeding and more.
One has to keep in mind, the online information is to help you, but for proper medical treatment, you do need to visit a professional. If minor medical problems, one could utilize the online source and treat themselves, but if within a few days they do not see an improvement in the condition, it is advisable to see a doctor. By treating themselves via online help, one thereby saves his and the practitioner’s time, thus the doctor could pay more attention to patients with severe cases who require their attention. When people, educate themselves online with the medical conditions, they would give precise information of their issue to the doctor, who would then advise correct treatment without running around the bush.
So as we conclude, in a way, if the medical information put up online is from genuine sources, it would be a positive development in society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... be a positive development in society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, thus, well, while, as to, for example, kind of, in my opinion, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97733711048 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8588524377 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57790368272 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.2990066116 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.416666667 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4166666667 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121373446936 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047376132646 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0258543707224 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788869024951 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208852950368 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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