some people want academic subjects such as history,physics to be taught in secondary school.Others want practical skills such as mechanical and gardening to be taught.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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...ons should focus on theoretical subjects,while others feel that technical or soft skil...
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...atory for students in high school level.From my point of view,both are crucial for l...
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...ng to circumstances. To commence with,academic subjects are important to accumulate in...
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...and to understand the topic elaborately.Because,without theoretical knowledge its futil...
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...titutions choose only applied knowledge.In particular,if anyone want to find archa...
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...ose only applied knowledge.In particular,if anyone want to find archaeological evid...
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...ve to acquire data profoundly by theory.Not only this,but also to enter any governm...
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... data profoundly by theory.Not only this,but also to enter any government job studen...
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...ob students need academic qualification.Apart from this,if students posses their acad...
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...d academic qualification.Apart from this,if students posses their academic career f...
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...though background subjects are important,but vocational skills also essential.This i...
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...nt,but vocational skills also essential.This is because,some students situation is d...
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...al skills also essential.This is because,some students situation is different from ot...
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...lls also essential.This is because,some students situation is different from others.What...
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...ents situation is different from others.What i mean by this is that due to unemploym...
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...situation is different from others.What i mean by this is that due to unemploymen...
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...mean by this is that due to unemployment,poverty or family crisis they have to earn mone...
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...r family crisis they have to earn money.So that,if they have technical knowledge,t...
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...y crisis they have to earn money.So that,if they have technical knowledge,they easi...
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...So that,if they have technical knowledge,they easily enter into job market.In develop...
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...ledge,they easily enter into job market.In developing countries like Bangladesh go...
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...r and export them n different countries.By this way,government earn hefty amount o...
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...t them n different countries.By this way,government earn hefty amount of remittance as well...
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...e unemployment problem. In my opinion,according to situation both knowledge is necessar...
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...o situation both knowledge is necessary.In the case of teaching,medicine professio...
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...ssion theoretical knowledge is important,whereas to run business empirical knowledge is ...
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...iness empirical knowledge is enough. In conclusion,skills or subjects are requi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, whereas, while, apart from, as to, i mean, in conclusion, in particular, as well as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.46428571429 5.12529762239 126% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.14762656497 2.80592935109 148% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683035714286 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 186.107925678 49.4020404114 377% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 289.6 106.682146367 271% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.8 20.7667163134 216% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.6 7.06120827912 348% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0933366384914 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502125036693 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325039198138 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0502125036693 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325039198138 0.056905535591 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.4 13.0946893788 240% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -7.02 50.2224549098 -14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.2 11.3001002004 223% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 21.08 12.4159519038 170% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.88 8.58950901804 138% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 34.5 9.78957915832 352% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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