Some people want their country to host international sports events while others believe that it brings more problems than benefits.
Discuss and give your opinion?
Sports include are form of commitive physical activities or games which throw casual or organised participation aim to use and maintained physical abilities and the skills. Most of the people desire their nation to organised international sports events while some people oppose this view they believe that it leads more problems than profits. Here,I will examine both views and my own perception.
There are multifarious points to shore up there are several benefits if a country hosts international sports events. First and foremost, international sports events are worthwhile to uplift the standard of economy. Organising international sports events are beneficial for every nations players because with the help of arranging these activities they show their talent in all over the world. To justify, participating in these sports events people excess many different things from others. Apart from that, joking the sport events gives optimum opportunity to composition good relationship with other nations. To examplify, in any dark days other country help to their country because of stronge bonding.
Shifting attention to negative side of the organising international sports events in their country. Firstly, the nation make a huge budget for this events. For instance, so many natives come from other countries with the purpose of playing so that the government can invest numerous amount for facilities such as medical, accommodation etc.
I firmly deem that, arranging such international sports activities are are very important for everyone to show their hidden talent in all around the globe and make a country image in whole world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, while, apart from, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50393700787 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80818798727 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594488188976 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9240857395 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.538461538 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325683111367 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112335936827 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924168992874 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176964645254 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761803764068 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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