Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others believe it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both views and give your opinion
While it is widely considered that working for multiple organisations is beneficial, there are people choosing to stay in the same business throughout their whole lives. I am consistent with the idea that both tracks enable workers to acquire distinct advantages, which are worth an attempt.
On the one hand, undeniable benefits are claimed for the workers who choose to dedicate their life for a single company. Firstly, those who are loyal to a firm are prioritised to be given more opportunities of promotion and salary increase. In fact, this is compatible with the purpose of retaining experienced employees as well as resulting in a stable life for workers. Secondly, there are chances to gain a deeper insight into the operating system, which enhance individual productivity and create a familiar workplace for the new employees. Eventually, both organisations and workers make the most out of this decision.
On the other hand, a personal career that involves attending numerous organisations is filled with loads of valuable experience. The initial reason is that workers have to face various situations due to differences in functioning systems among companies. As a result, those people could intensify their problem-solving skills and flexibility to adapt to a diversity of environments effortlessly. In addition, the more companies people work for the more likely they expand their relationship, which makes sense for the increase in support stemming from colleagues. For instance, if there are difficulties relating to the current firm that could not be shared with co-workers, the external assistance would become a luxury for those who remain in just one company.
To conclude, both forms of working bring out benefits that match the needs of workers along with organisations. I am inclined to believe that work for one or many companies
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in fact, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34013605442 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04258877866 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58843537415 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5074007807 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.142857143 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317657416119 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102456857926 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080392322513 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201474279505 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286994152527 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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