Some people work for the same organization all their work life. Others think that it is better to work for different organization. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples.
Most people enjoy their work with their passions. they believe a person will access if they work for something interested in. joined the organization is one of the in fluent factors for people who chose their careers. the program on the organization which their chose made them really enjoy every single day of their activities. sometimes, they can become a workaholic and forgot their time and never let their times waste. Although they know is not good for their health.
Even though work builds a career on the same organization is a good decision but on the other hand it will become a monotone personality. you only work in the same field and cases every day. on this situation, you can get frustrated and think work is not interested anymore. it will be different when people want to go out of their comfort zone. work on a different organization can give a chance to explore not only about passions but also the mindset.
In conclusion, make a decision in a career is not easy. sometimes, people think work on the same organization is much better than a different one. they think, they will enjoy their activities and can understand what should they do. but, the advantage of work on the same organization can explore more about yourself and never want to try to go up to the next level.
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- The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. 56
- Some people work for the same organization all their work life. Others think that it is better to work for different organization. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1070.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67248908297 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57494591878 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506550218341 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 337.5 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.376875887 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.3333333333 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2666666667 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349428164396 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126479569407 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723995878139 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239554725392 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254270056605 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.38 8.58950901804 74% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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