Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations
Discuss both views and give your own opinion
People have different views about the appropriate environment to work. Some people believe that spending the entire working life in the same group gives more opportunities, meanwhile, others propose working in different workplaces. I personally believe that it is better to work in diverse business groups.
The option to keep working the same organization is better for several reasons. The employees might get familiar with the culture in their current workplace. They are likely to know their colleagues in different departments in the company, so each person can assist each other whenever someone gets in trouble. Besides, the workers can get the promotion based on the time they devote. The longer they work, the more wage they may receive. When considering to be upgraded to a higher position, a person who works longer usually is the first one in a short list.
On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial for the employees to change their workplaces. Firstly, it is a challenging experience. After graduating the university, the young people do not have a clear orientation in their mind about working, so they can work in different places to find out whether they can be suitable for the career that they will spend their whole life. For example, working in the multinational companies give them a chance to approach new styles in work. In addition, it seems more comfortable to work in diverse organizations because it is quite boring if the workers use their time in the same business group. Meeting the new people, new friends will extend the relationship.
For the reasons that I mentioned above, it seems to me that the employees will be more successful in their career if they try to work in different places
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, may, so, while, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97260273973 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75785951031 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513698630137 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4160420005 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.75 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414516376065 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142719154958 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111937718578 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277459751788 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929259724742 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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