Although a valuable variety of methods has been designed to promote relaxation, some experts subscribe to the view that being free of doing daily activities is of great benefit. I personally acknowledge this point of view which I will discuss in this essay.
Admittedly, the ability to relax and effectively manage stress is essential for the physical and emotional well-being. Interestingly, people`s choices and activities to refresh and recharge the inner calm may hugely vary from person to person. Equally, doing nothing such as lying in a beach could be a wonderful restorative tool, allowing everybody`s mind to be clear from internal and external experiences, detrimental thoughts and feelings and etc. which produce great calming effects. For instance, meditation is a sophisticated well-designed practice on which subjects spend the time to do nothing, hopefully relieving physical and mental tensions which have afflicted people.
With regard to the above argument, the recent modern breakthroughs in technology have revolutionized people`s lifestyle in a way that they are constantly bombarded with sensory information and global events in an instant. When coupled with greater demands on our time and less time for ourselves, the level of distress and burnout can gradually be compounded. Therefore, it seems a practical proposition to be away from technological gadgets such as smartphones as well as the internet, certainly ensuring a healthy, balanced and satisfying life. Finally, some physical disorders which can manifest with stress merit serious consideration, when embracing an effective management of stress, whereby taking only a break might not be a sensible option to overcome stress.
All things considered, relaxing and spending the time to do nothing can be judged as a necessity for a balanced and less-stressed life, as long as no underlying disease has been diagnosed as the root cause of stress.
- Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 95
- Money for postgraduate research is limited, therefore, some people think financial support from governments should be provided only for scientific research rather than less useful subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- Many old buildings protected by law are part of a nation’s history. Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by news ones.How important is it to maintain old buildings?Should history stand in the way of progress? 84
- Many students have to study subjects which they do not like. Some people think this is a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? 78
- Every year several languages die out every year. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier when there are fewer languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 454, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...nces, detrimental thoughts and feelings and etc. which produce great calming effects. Fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, may, so, therefore, well, for instance, such as, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55369127517 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19838796892 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640939597315 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5165574859 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.916666667 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166738392204 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054275906247 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571941784598 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104945241752 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353459203742 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.81 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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