In some places, workers are required to retire at a specific age. In other places, workers can retire when they choose. In your opinion, should there be a mandatory retirement age for all workers?
Hitherto, some people thought that it was a requirement that employees, at a specific age, have to be retired. Although others censure this sentiment, I fervently advocate it due to some legitimate reasons.
Admittedly, mandatory retirement is of importance to safeguarding the effects of old age. In the 60s, most people experience problems with their physical or mental well-being; forcing them to drop their occupations would help them avoid arbitrary decision-making, which could lead to mistakes and misjudgments. For example, elderly employees often enroll in various jobs, such as judges, and surgeons… which demand conscious, logical thinking and have sweeping impacts. This means that if mistakes were made, the elderly would have perilous consequences for theme selves and maybe a large number of other people. Hence, the impacts of old age might be reduced by compulsory retirement.
Further and even more prominently, forced retirement allows opportunities for more employment of younger people. Perceptibly, most of the elderly who are employees enroll in top occupations, so if they quit their jobs, massive chances would be created for young workers. Furthermore, young people need salary to set up their homes, lifestyle and support their family in economic. It is noticeable that if young are not given opportunities to begin a career, it will be more difficult to encourage them later. As a result, forced ceasing working gives younger generations chances to develop themselves.
In conclusion, I completely agree that compulsory retirement should be applied. Mandatory retirement offers young chances to grow and helps the elderly eliminate the consequences of their old age impacts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 581, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...consequences for theme selves and maybe a large number of other people. Hence, the impacts of old...
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Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...eople. Perceptibly, most of the elderly who are employees enroll in top occupations, so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, may, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54406130268 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04697205367 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616858237548 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9768995306 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.357142857 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196498589938 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749435477329 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685501407477 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137938058904 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547829426885 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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