Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of traveling to a workplace every day. Do you think the advantages of working from home outweigh the disadvantages
In my opinion, the benefits of working from home offset the drawbacks due to various reasons.
Working from home is a lot more comfortable for lots of people. Employees can save a great deal of time and money since they do not have to travel so often, which means people will have more time for work and for themselves, too. Less traveling will also help reduce traffic congestion and environmental pollution.
Besides, working at home does not mean staying inside all day long, people can choose to work in their garden or backyard, wherever makes them feel convenient to work. Moreover, employees are under less stress with a flexible working schedule.
To be fair, there are still some disadvantages of teleworking. For instance, working from personal space will reduce face-to-face interactions among colleagues. However, the problem is solved thanks to the Internet. As for now, people from around the globe can easily contact and work with others from distances. Another drawback is that some people may get distracted from work by external factors. This situation requires employees to be highly awarded of what they should and should not do for their paid jobs.
In conclusion, working from home should be encouraged because the advantages overcome the disadvantages.
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- As Marketing Director write an e mail to the Chief Executive Officer CEO of Wincote International summarising the changes that you will make to the product and its marketing when the jacket is relaunched 65
- Official letter
- How COVID 19 changed the working enviroment
- Talk about a marketing campaign that impressed you 80
- How COVID 19 has changed working enviroment 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 230, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun traveling is countable.
Suggestion: Fewer
... time for work and for themselves, too. Less traveling will also help reduce traffic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, may, moreover, so, still, as for, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1073.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18357487923 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71838629127 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642512077295 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7976925791 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5384615385 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37053830769 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132897568348 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750406156562 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220348951616 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418684537547 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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