. Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects,especially at the primary level.Do you agree or disagree?

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. Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects,
especially at the primary level.
Do you agree or disagree?

The issue of other school subjects has grown in importance since the inception of music, art and drama at the primary level of education. I firmly agree that extra-curricular subjects like music, art and drama are crucial to being included in the early schooling years. This essay will highlight this issue using examples from most of the schools in Bangladesh and a recent survey conducted in the USA to demonstrate points and support arguments.

Firstly, subjects like music, art and drama should be an essential part of any primary school curriculum to excel in the students' performance . This is because these subjects inculcate in students , skills and abilities which provide aid in better intellectual performance not only in their academic results but also in their overall performance. For example, in Bangladesh, most of the primary schools which have music, art and drama being introduced into the curriculum have shown that their students performed better than the other schools. Therefore, I prefer to these subjects vital for each and every school.

Secondly, music, art and drama inclusion in the school curriculum assist the pupils to decide about their career later in life. This is due to the fact that students learn music, art and drama at an early age in their life and gain confidence in taking up such activities in the future. For instance, a recent survey conducted in the USA have shown that children who are taught about music, art and drama have chosen themselves to see as musician , artist and actors for their careers. Thus, I suppose that every primary school should include these subjects mandatory into their curriculum.

To conclude, these subjects are extremely necessary for the students' overall performance and careers . I believe that each and every school take into account these subjects into their curriculum. It is hoped that the education system of one's country develops if this trend is being continued at the primary education level.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i suppose

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17080745342 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62342400208 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490683229814 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2487799283 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.928571429 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254172228427 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109744289041 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100025336402 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17632684454 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773920593947 0.056905535591 136% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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