In some societies,the numbers of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. Some people think that regardless of age,teenagers who commit major crimes should be receive adult punishment. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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... should be punished as the adults are. I , however, believe that, if they committe...
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... of teenagers are escalating day by day.Firstly, parents are accountable for teenagers ...
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... are accountable for teenagers misdoings,parents should aware the children about, conseq...
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...n about, consequences, of such misdeeds.Due to lack of employment,they start pursue...
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... such misdeeds.Due to lack of employment,they start pursue criminal venture,for insta...
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...yment,they start pursue criminal venture,for instance robbery,burglary and so on,in ...
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...ue criminal venture,for instance robbery,burglary and so on,in order to accomplish their ...
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...,for instance robbery,burglary and so on,in order to accomplish their daily belongi...
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...er to accomplish their daily belongings.Thus,for such kinds of criminals ,they shoul...
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...o accomplish their daily belongings.Thus,for such kinds of criminals ,they should no...
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...ongings.Thus,for such kinds of criminals ,they should not be treated as adults pun...
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...be sent into reforming community centers ,where community members try to rehabilit...
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...rs try to rehabilitate them. Secondly,imprisonments are,just like, universities of crimes a...
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...tate them. Secondly,imprisonments are,just like, universities of crimes and crimin...
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... completed the punishment of minor crime , will do serious delinquencies,thus,refo...
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...or crime , will do serious delinquencies,thus,reforming community centers better for ...
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...orming community centers better for them .However,if someone commit serious crimes...
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...ming community centers better for them .However,if someone commit serious crimes,for ex...
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...mmunity centers better for them .However,if someone commit serious crimes,for examp...
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...ers better for them .However,if someone commit serious crimes,for example,murder and r...
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...However,if someone commit serious crimes,for example,murder and rapes, then they sho...
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...omeone commit serious crimes,for example,murder and rapes, then they should be punished...
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...be punished as adults like death penalty,if we want to terminate upcoming generatio...
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...tion for doing such kings of activities.And, we should teach them some lessons base...
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...n such activities inside school premises ,which aid them to be cleared more. To...
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...arding pros and cons of such activities.Otherwise,regardless of age ,they should be treat...
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...os and cons of such activities.Otherwise,regardless of age ,they should be treated accordin...
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...h activities.Otherwise,regardless of age ,they should be treated according to be t...
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... according to be their attempted crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, no doubt, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.98406374502 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.95226085754 2.80592935109 141% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661354581673 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.608153532 49.4020404114 295% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 187.75 106.682146367 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.375 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.125 7.06120827912 228% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223528800447 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101946881984 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387098599433 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143577677067 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260656807287 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 13.0946893788 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.09 50.2224549098 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.0 12.4159519038 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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