Education is essential thing for everyone and without money no one can survive. Now days, few students earn while they learn but students won't get time for studies and they take a tension and feel under pressure. In this essay, Ill discuss what are some reasons of this.
In India, some people are under poverty line and they dont have enough income for daily food or own house or cloths. As a result they won't afford education to their child and child started to work in his/her early age. The retirement age in India is 58 to 60. So some families can bear the fees of their child up to their graduation and cannot pay for higher education fees. These days’ universities also come up with online courses and part time courses for post graduation studies. Thus, students’ starts prefer these courses so that they can earn at least some money for their studies.
Government of India is announced stipend for almost all higher education courses like masters in engineering (M.E.), Masters in Science (MSc) etc. to attract the youth for higher education. Since 2015 University of Pune (one of the tops university in India) started earn while learn course for those who cannot pay fee for their studies. So students chooses either stipend or earn while learn.
As a result, students dont able to manage their work life and education because they dont have proper experience about how to handle these types of situations. So start takes a tension and feel under pressure.
In my opinion, at least under graduation education should be free for poor students so they can learn stress free. The earn while learn system should be only for Post Graduation studies.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Dr kumar
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also, but, if, so, thus, while, at least, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80769230769 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28961183674 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531468531469 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2163784311 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8823529412 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8235294118 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234454512944 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820827137362 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543685638898 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129629946683 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828722146799 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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