Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Most of the students are working while studying which result in mental pressure and poor quality of education. This passage elucidates what causes them to engage in employment while studying and various solutions how students can leverage time efficiently to have quality of education with minimal study pressure. This essay first describes how hefty tuition fees for colleges causes parents to borrow education loan and consequently, students re-pay the amount with interest. I believe that there are possible solution students can adapt to overcome issues while studying.
Due to hefty tuition fee for the courses in the University, parents borrow education loan from the bank at high interest and with the pressure of repaying back, students tend to work part time with their studies .To fulfil basic necessities and daily routine expenses, student refrain asking money from their home, hence they start part time jobs while studying. In my own experience I remember working in the UK with Starbucks café as cashier while I was pursuing my post-graduation.
The best and effective solution with my own experience I suggest is time management between work and study. Engaging in part time jobs on our College day off's gives ample amount of time in entire week to study and work on assignments which gives quality of education and better understanding. Furthermore, involvement in less physical part time jobs reduces chance of tiredness and fatigue.
In conclusion, I believe that mainly lack of financial resources causes students to work, but this problem can be mitigated by lowering the amount of financial expenses students have to meet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30038022814 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7053919975 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570342205323 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.8651416443 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.4 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341963978385 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135417108715 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709184755449 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200042368372 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682883510303 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.