Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
There are many students work during their studies. Although these inclinations may have some negative consequences, the number of young people employed during their studies is rising. I suppose that this problem has several reasons and that special steps should be taken.
Many students will make money during their studies for many reasons. I believe, however, that secondary education is one of the common factors. As several universities and colleges pay high-school tuition, some families cannot afford to give their children full higher education. These students therefore need to work to pay for tuition at colleges and universities. Live expenses are also available. Many students have to pay for food, fun etc. But that allows you to change your mind. You think you would make the money to pay for this. I think that the question of students working in their studies contributes to lower education quality and at all, has no advantages. It should then be resolved at the governmental level.
I would suggest two possible solutions to this dilemma. First, higher education should be free of charge by the government. This can be achieved, for example, by financing educational establishments from the country's budget. Not only will it make universities and colleges open to all, but it will also reduce the number of working students. The second approach is to try to make more money for the family. It would not only help the government ease the burden, but also generate more money for the goods. And they will have more cash and more time to research, from self-financing to family support.
In conclusion, I believe that students operate primarily because of lack of financial resources, but this problem can be overcome by reducing the amount of funding to be met by students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, may, second, so, then, therefore, for example, i suppose, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0813559322 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71663563328 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528813559322 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0669537857 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.380952381 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0476190476 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09523809524 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245661435328 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724586241406 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640395983123 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135985648042 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454020365082 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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