Some teachers tend to reward students with high academic results. Others, however, support and reward students that improved their grades. Discuss both approaches. Give your opinion and provide examples.
It has been a trend rewarding the students for what they achieved academically. While some educational practitioners prone to give a performance appraisal to the students who successfully obtained higher results, others, meanwhile, argue that giving a special gift for those who managed to improve academic results significantly should also be included as the awardees.
Firstly, proponents contend that while the students have good academic results, they should be rewarded by the teachers as a form of valuing their hard-work. The students would keep motivated and probably improve themselves tow...
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While some educational practitioners prone to give a performance appraisal to the students who successfully obtained higher results
While some educational practitioners are prone to give a performance appraisal to the students who are successfully obtained higher results
Sentence: While some educational practitioners prone to give a performance appraisal to the students who successfully obtained higher results, others, meanwhile, argue that giving a special gift for those who managed to improve academic results significantly should also be included as the awardees.
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